Conservative. Idaho. Software engineer. Historian. Trying to prevent Idiocracy from becoming a documentary.
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"And we know that all things work together for good to them that love God, to them who are the called according to his purpose." -- Rom. 8:28
I can't claim to be an amateur yet -- more a fool with the tools. Any suggestions that you can make to make this more professional looking would be appreciated.
The audio seems somewhat inconsistent, and your narrator sounds like she's got a bit of a head cold. The text she's reading is fine, but to make a serious sales pitch, you're going to need to improve it.
And to be REALLY cynical, you might get better results raising money if the narrator "Sounds black".
I disagree with Mauser on both points. I think the narrator is terrific ... Clear, knowledgeable. And I don't see why the narrator needs to sound black at all.
You don't give yourself credit. I thought it was as good or better than similar shorts I have seen in national quality museums.
ReplyDeleteLooks like an interesting project.
The audio seems somewhat inconsistent, and your narrator sounds like she's got a bit of a head cold. The text she's reading is fine, but to make a serious sales pitch, you're going to need to improve it.
ReplyDeleteAnd to be REALLY cynical, you might get better results raising money if the narrator "Sounds black".
I disagree with Mauser on both points. I think the narrator is terrific ... Clear, knowledgeable. And I don't see why the narrator needs to sound black at all.
ReplyDeleteHow does someone contribute to this effort?
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