Conservative. Idaho. Software engineer. Historian. Increasingly, frustrated with how the greed of a small number of lawyers is making life unreasonable for ordinary people.
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Saturday, December 22, 2012
First Attempt
I can't claim to be an amateur yet -- more a fool with the tools. Any suggestions that you can make to make this more professional looking would be appreciated.
The audio seems somewhat inconsistent, and your narrator sounds like she's got a bit of a head cold. The text she's reading is fine, but to make a serious sales pitch, you're going to need to improve it.
And to be REALLY cynical, you might get better results raising money if the narrator "Sounds black".
I disagree with Mauser on both points. I think the narrator is terrific ... Clear, knowledgeable. And I don't see why the narrator needs to sound black at all.
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You don't give yourself credit. I thought it was as good or better than similar shorts I have seen in national quality museums.
Looks like an interesting project.
The audio seems somewhat inconsistent, and your narrator sounds like she's got a bit of a head cold. The text she's reading is fine, but to make a serious sales pitch, you're going to need to improve it.
And to be REALLY cynical, you might get better results raising money if the narrator "Sounds black".
I disagree with Mauser on both points. I think the narrator is terrific ... Clear, knowledgeable. And I don't see why the narrator needs to sound black at all.
How does someone contribute to this effort?
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