Conservative. Idaho. Software engineer. Historian. Increasingly, frustrated with how the greed of a small number of lawyers is making life unreasonable for ordinary people.
You don't give yourself credit. I thought it was as good or better than similar shorts I have seen in national quality museums.Looks like an interesting project.
The audio seems somewhat inconsistent, and your narrator sounds like she's got a bit of a head cold. The text she's reading is fine, but to make a serious sales pitch, you're going to need to improve it.And to be REALLY cynical, you might get better results raising money if the narrator "Sounds black".
I disagree with Mauser on both points. I think the narrator is terrific ... Clear, knowledgeable. And I don't see why the narrator needs to sound black at all.
How does someone contribute to this effort?
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